i don't know what i was thinking when i said i'd try to read through and make editing notes for all 320 pages in one day, haha. i didn't even manage to do 5% of that, although i did start it. i'm pleasantly surprised at how good the writing actually is, there's a really great line that i had forgotten i'd written every page, sometimes two per page. i can only conclude i'm a better writer than i give myself credit for. anyway, i can see now that this will take a while. i am glad i printed this out though, it does seem to help a lot to read it in this format.